Violent Violet Volkswagen: pantun attempt #1

Monday, October 25, 2010

pantun attempt #1

rintik rintik di balik jendela
bagai menyanyi lagu di hati
dijentik jentik hati yang lara
mengharap senyum terukir kembali

8 comments:

GaGaK said...: menjentik jejentik terjentik kerepek,
kerepek jejentik masin nakgila,
Hati yang lara sudah terdetik,
kalau dah sedar nakubat bila?.; October 25, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Merissa K. said...: Hasrul, if ada like button, i dah like dah pantun you! :)

btw, kerepek jejentik? sounds like a cuisine i wouldnt wanna try. haha.

jejentik mutant berbulu lebat
ibu jejentik terasa hampa
bukan tak mahu bawa berubat
tapi ubat tak jumpa jumpa

haha sakai; October 25, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Igniz said...: rintik-rintik hujan mencurah.......

...ewah!

haha. gagal.; October 25, 2010 at 10:18 PM
Merissa K. said...: hahahahahahha sengal! ewah!; October 25, 2010 at 10:43 PM
Afiq Malik said...: (Awak tak ada nama klasik -_-"),

Dijentik jentik hati yang lara,
Mengharap senyum terukir kembali,
Berpikul bergantang nyanyian cinta,
Tuluskah dinda kasihkah hati?; October 26, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Merissa K. said...: (ada lah! Kartika tu apa? hehe)

Dinda termenung seorang diri
Kanda teringat masa yang lalu
Tuluskah dinda? Kasihkah hati?
Hanya Tuhan saja yang tahu.

:)

p/s : btw afiq, kenapa i selalu second guess myself bila baca apa u tulis? hahahahaha.; October 26, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Afiq Malik said...: LOL

I suffer from a severe split personality disorder, that's why.

It's a curse really. Ask Iylia :); October 26, 2010 at 6:47 PM
GaGaK said...: Ibu jejentik menggesek dinding,
Sambil menjentik popkon jejentik,
Kalu takjumpa janganla rungsing,
Geng kan ramai sedia merapik.

h; October 29, 2010 at 12:59 AM

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